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Seeing the Hawk Again

November 4th 2007 07:59


Apparently some of you like verse that ACTUALLY rhymes!
So I've reposted this in You Should Read!
It originally appeared in Scholia April 10 2007.



The poem was written August 20 1985

Copyright J. Vaux 1985 2007

Seeing the HAWK

With frantic grace

the raptor's wings hold high place,

halting in space,

steady in their constant pace,

swirling, dancing, and displaying,


the artless art of high hovering,

waiting for rats to go rovering,

until her flight seems mere playing.


Whether you read it the first time or not could you tell me why you found it of interest?

Thank You [/COLOR]
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Comment by Anonymous

November 5th 2007 02:46
I think your poem captures the sort of casual way the hawk does it's very arresting thing ...

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